My Yummy Easter Treat
My Easter egg had a blue wrapper on it and it looked like a dinosaur egg. It was so sparkly and pretty. It tasted so yummy and chocolaty, it was sweet.When i was eating the Easter egg i felt very happy . My Easter egg was big. because of the lock down, my sisters got a Easter Egg too theirs was the same as mine but just a different color wrapper .The Easter bunny couldn't come to everyone so my Mummy and Daddy had to look after our Easter treats this year for him, but mummy and daddy tell me i may be getting a special visit this weekend.
Fantastic writing Ivy, I am glad your parents were able to help the Easter Bunny out this year! Have a look back at your writing and see if you can fix the capital I(s) that are lower case and make sure you have a space between your full stops and next sentence.
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